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Oops,watch it there, Foxshadow

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Foxshadow may be good at fighting, but the simplest hunt will trip him up. ^^

Bio Excerpt: click this to read the entire thing. ^^

i really like fighting and learning, even though i think i already know it all. but doestep says that there's almost always something new to learn, so i guess she's right. i like knowing what i'm doing and who i'm following. life makes more sense when i'm following instructions, i guess. I also like it when cat think that i'm great, especially she-cats. sometimes doestep gets annoyed when i gloat just a tiny little bit! i guess that's just her, though. but not these so much ; not knowing what i'm doing. that really bugs me. doestep says it's because i tend to be a bit insecure, but for once i know she's wrong. i also hate it when cats get annoyed with me. i'm not that horrible...am i? i also don't like it when others do things better than me. or when someone makes me look stupid. 'cause i'm not.. what really ticks me off is is when cats don't notice me. especially cats that i like/admire/obsess over but what i really love is is when cats notice me. or when things go well for me. i'm sort of scared of being left out of things. and i've got this habit of telling others about how awesome i can be. everyone calls it boasting, but it's not. i'm just telling the truth..


``history
my mother is Deerfang and my father is Gooserun. Both of them died awhile ago. i have no siblings and that's my family. these are my really close friends Doestep and my ittle 'gang' (that's what the elders call me group of friends). and this is how i became a warrior!

*I was apprenticed to Doestep, by her request. I was so happy and i knew that i would be the best warrior ever!

*I found out that i was really good at stalking and this obscure way of fighting. it involves stealth, mostly, and--oh wait, i can;t tell you that. doestep said that if i told anyone then i was have serious competition.

*but, i was a little slow at hunting and some of the other apprentices teased me about it.

*i worked really, really, really hard at fighting, and i tried to improve upon my meager hunting skills. now they're okay, but you wouldn't know it then!

*i learned that doestep had some awesome ideas and stuff, and that i could help her! i can't tell you what they are, though. sorry.

*everything went as planned--i improved on hunting and i became even better at stalking. soon it was time for my warrior ceremony!

*i was so angry. the leader gave me the name of 'shadow' not because i'm in shadowclan but because i was 'doestep's little shadow'. but she told me to forget it, and that being her shadow wasn't that bad. i did try and forget about it. but i still can remember...
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Mastaria's avatar
nice hint at the end of his story there ^^

I love when that happens, a char has this hidden anger that they will never let go of. It makes for some good twists in a story later on!

Good job! :thumbsup: